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Elle Est Journaliste

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This is something i did for a stupid french project. She was supposed to look like a journalist, but oh well.
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I'm guessing that by your description that you're not too fond of the outcome? (I think?) Anyway, this is a good beginning but she looks hollow. What I mean is that you've got yourself a good base to make a good drawing. You know...for instance, folds in the clothes. Look at how your clothes fold and stretch when you're in this position. Instead of leaving the hair as one big block, create more hair. Details and stronger body proportions will make this a great drawing. Also, take a look at the head of this figure. Herear is too low. It should lie in line w/ her eye. there are more but I would like to see a more finished piece. take pride in what you've done but don't be afraid to push it farther. Let me know how it turns how.

Gary